Wednesday, November 11, 2009

MichaelDavis45
I think you made great picture choices on this site. The pictures bring the site alive. I like how the gnome on the index page helps create a border around where the text is. On the left side of all the pages it looks like you missed a spot when you were erasing or fading the background out. That spot kind of bugs me. It makes it seem like you just did it really fast, without care. I think the index page should pop a little more compared to the 2nd tier pages.The placement of the main picture on the Bird Bath page is kind of awkward.

Aristeia88
I enjoy the clean cut idea you have going on. On the index page some of the words are hard to read on top of the grass. I would suggest a bolder font and maybe something more readable. If I had more time I would go back and fix mine again and choose a font a little easier to read. You might use more elements from the index page on the 2nd tier pages to help bring the site together. I like the layout idea you have going on in your 2nd tier pages, but I feel like you should eliminate some of the white space.

wademayer
I really, really like the cartoon feel this site has. I really appreciate your skills in Illustrator. I like how you took the advice from the critique and used an element from the home page on each of the 2nd tier pages. It really helped bring the site together. On the miscellaneous page I think there should be a border around your picture since you went with that on all the rest of your pages. You could have simply just forgot to apply one. On the index page, I think it would be better if the deer wasn't in front of the 'n' .